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英语作文如何得高分 一般说来，每次考试后，阅卷老师要在很短的时间内评阅完大量的试卷，工作量非常大。尽管作文评分有具体的标准，但它仍然是主观性较大的部分，而且写作部分没有“半分”的评分标准，有时我们阅卷之时的一念之差，就可能令你失去宝贵的一分。因此，这里我觉得介绍一些这些阅卷老师阅卷时的心理，对考生是极为有用的。 1.整洁的卷面和漂亮的书写 漂亮的书写令人赏心悦目，可使阅卷老师从疲惫不堪中解脱出来，给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。就我而言，每次批改作业，如遇龙飞凤舞、字迹较为潦草者，均“押后处理”。说老实话，当改至后期，我便两眼发直，精神极度疲惫，于是也龙飞凤舞，草草给个分数，算是交差了。 2.字数要达到最低要求 因为作文对字数要求高，每篇小作文的字数在100-150字左右，大作文的字数必须达到160~200字左右，所以考生切记要在规定的范围内完成自己的工作。但是，有些考生在写作过程中总存在这样的想法：写的越长，阅卷老师的分数肯定e79fa5e98193e59b9ee7ad94364会打得更高，其实未必。有时候，甚至会适得其反。试想，考生的文章是写长了，但是考生同时又将自己的弱点暴露得“一览无余”，那样，考生怎么可能得到高分呢？所以，考生应注意在写作中长度一定要适当。 3.结构完整，脉络清晰 考试时作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。作文阅卷老师都是经验非常丰富的大学英语教师，他们要在数分钟内浏览完考生作文，给出评分意见。如何吸引阅卷老师的注意呢？我认为，一个完整框架是必不可少的，首先应让阅卷老师觉得你的文章是结构完整合理、符合要求的。换言之，即具备英语文章的基本要素：引言段、扩展段和结尾段。引言段中要包含thesis statement（中心句），扩展段的每段均应有topic sentence（主题句），结尾段应该是一个自然收尾的段落。中文讲究意合，而英语注意形合，要求句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的过渡词，把上下文有机地连接起来。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。 有些写作的大作文要求用160~200词写出一篇高质量的议论文，其形式有图示、漫画、情景等专门类型。近几年来则集中体现为灵活多变、隐含寓意的图示/漫画作文和具有学术分析特点的图表作文。这要求考生要精确设置构架，内容、例子紧扣主题，并且严谨地遣词造句。
写信篇：636f7079e799bee5baa6362
Dear Mr Smith,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some
Best wishes,
自我介绍：
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
话题作文：
Freedom for many children is the coming day when they could improve myself in their own way to use my 24 hours. They can study language by watching film instead of working on boring grammar and multiple choices.
Freedom is as simple as my playing piano all night without worrying about disturbing my 14-year-old neighbour who has to go to school the next day for my house is specially made.
It also could be freedom in my dream that one day, political democracy becomes true. Freedom in my life is the name of all kindness and happiness.
People have common desire under the sun. For mankind, freedom commonly means respect, love, blessing and dignity. For some people, freedom is that some day, he can give up his own interests to guarantee others’ rights. It is no wonder that so many people fought for freedom even didn’t hesitate to give up their lives when necessary .
I would like to be a freedom fighter for human rights some day in future.
环境问题：
The world is not only hungry, it is also thirsty. This may sound strange, since nearly seventy percent of the earth's surface is covered with water. But about ninety percent of this is sea water. Man and most of the animals can only drink and use the remaining percent of water——fresh water.
The need for water is increasing day by day. Only steps are taken to deal with this problem immediately can we avoid a severe world wide water shortage later on. One of the first steps is to develop ways to reuse it.
Experiments have already keen carried out in this field. The used witer has been pumped to a water purifying plant. There, it can be separated from waste matter and treated with chemicals so that it can be used again, just as if it were fresh water from a spring.
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某对外发行的英文报纸对中国群众体育现状进行了调查，请根据下列图表和所给提示，用英语写一篇报道，以便向该报投稿。
说明：1．体质下降；
2．应充分认识体育锻炼的重要性；
3．采取措施，提供人们锻炼的场地和器材（facilities ）；
4．字数：120 — 140. 报道的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently, we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
Over half of the people say they haven’t got enough time to take exercises. 34.9 percent of them complain they don’t have places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities, while another 12.9 percent of the people feel that they live too far away from the training centers. Some of them even don’t know how to train.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities.
标题是申论文章的灵魂细谈申论标题选取技巧申论及范文
标题是申论文章的灵魂，确定标题是写申论文章的第一步，也是必须的，
一、拟题的要求
凡是成功的标题，基本上要做到贴切、鲜明、精练、具体、生动。
（一）、贴切贴切标题贴切有三层含义：第一层是题文一致，即标题对论题范围的概括、对中心论点的提炼、对态度倾向的表述应与评论的内容或思想相符。第二层是词语的运用正确恰当，即标题制作谴词用字时，不可望文生义，也不可滥用辞藻。第三层是题意确切妥帖，不会产生歧解或误解。
（二）、鲜明标题应当鲜明，提倡什么、反对什么、褒扬什么、针砭什么，都应当在题目中有所反映，也就是说，标题应该有立场、有观点、有态度、有倾向，切忌钝刀子割肉，不痛不痒。
（三）、精炼要做到精炼这一点，一是要结构简单，多用单行题；二是要文字简约，要言不烦。
（四）、生动生动标题形象生动发现重要。生动的标题能够先声夺人，赋予文章以新意和活力，既能抓住受众，又让人过目难忘。使标题生动的方法有多种：一是变换标题句式通过把陈述句变为假设句、疑问句或感叹句等，使评论标题具有浓郁的感情色彩。“清山绿水”离我们远去谁之过？；"致富路"缘何成了"民怨路；教育(医疗)乱收费应向e68a84e799bee5baa6336谁问责；"献礼工程"当休矣活用成语、谚语、俗语。把成语谚语俗语等引入标题，直接引用或变化引用，既可以使标题言简意赅，还可以使标题别有新意。一是直接引用，即把成语、谚语、俗语直接引入标题，借助于受众，认识评论所要分析的事物或问题；二是变化引用即在引用成语、谚语、俗语时，对文字进行一些细微的改动，使词义发生一定的变化，赋予词语以新的内涵。莫要"亡羊"才"补牢" 三是巧用修辞手法 现代汉语的修辞手法有多种，常用的有比喻、比拟、借代、双关、对照、连珠等，这些手法都可以用于评论标题的制作。再塑园丁形象----浅谈加强师德建设；书包在愤怒；“养命钱”不能乱用；“房虫儿”还能活多久
二、拟标题时应注意的事项
（一）、议论文的标题要反映文章的主要内容拟题目不要太大，即论述的内容不要太多。一般议论文，往往需要集中论述一个问题，提出一个论点，题目就要反映文章论述的范围。如果题目很大，论述的事物或者问题却很小，就会文不对题。
（二）、议论文的标题要醒目醒目的标题既要抓住内容要点，又要见解明了有时，为了使标题吸引人，可以摘取文中有代表性的片言只语或文中触及的某些引人注目的事实作标题，再用副标题介绍文章的主要内容或写作缘由，如：抓好民生之本贵在和衷共济-正确看待下岗失业现象；人类智慧的一座“灯塔”------深刻认识科学技术是第一生产力；生死抉择的考验-我们党有决心有能力解决腐败问题；安得广厦千万间-----加强经济适用房建设与管理；“救死扶伤”白衣天使的天责-----浅谈加强医德建设；再塑园丁形象----浅谈加强师德建设；还老百姓知情权-----浅谈价格听证制度的完善；变暗补为名算--------浅谈公务员住房货币化改革；公立医院的公益性不容改变-----浅谈医疗体制改革等。
（三）、比喻，俗称打比方，是指在描写某一事物或说明某一道理时用与它有相似点的事物或道理来说明，在各种修辞格中它是最为常见的一种。比喻的主要作用在于用具体的描绘抽象的，以浅显的阐释深奥的，以熟悉的说明陌生的。它利用形象思维的形式，使谴词造句含蓄委婉、意味无穷，能让人们借助使用者营造的意境，展开想象的翅膀，去形象而又深刻地体会使用者所表述的意思。〈〈机遇就像一条河〉〉。机遇之所以像一条河，是因为机遇就如同河一样不停的在你身边流淌着，对每个人都是公平的，关键在于你能否有眼力识别它，有没有能力抓住它。这种比喻意在说明机遇是常见的，就看你能不能发现它，利用它。〈〈莫要"亡羊"才"补牢"〉〉、〈〈别把百姓当“白鼠”〉〉、〈〈别把学生(病人)当“人质”〉〉、生产安全拒绝"带血的“GDP"